Does the design include a primary focal point? Where is it located and how is the focal point emphasized? Refer to the rule of thirds .
The focal point is the box inside the box which Leads the viewer in direction of going up.
Has a Visual Flow been established that activates the entire picture plane? What elements are used to lead the eye around the entire composition?
visual flow is located right where the focal point is and it shows the inner box going in an outward direction creating the viewer to look at a geometric outline.
Does the composition successfully utilize repetition of shape and line? How?
yes it utilizes the shape of boxes and geometrical squared off lines. Repetitious with arrows pointing and letters
Does the drawing display a confident use of the pitt pens?
The bold lines and thin lines in some areas display more control over the pen so yes.
Does the drawing explore variation in line quality/thickness?
yes there are points of boldness and thinness and flow .
What are the successful AND unsuccessful aspects of your design? Remember that we learn just as much from our failures than from our achievements!
my success is the overall composition , and it’s directional flow , my unsuccessful parts were the rule of thirds and being too representational .
Has the final design been executed in a professional manner? Designs should utilize the designated materials with care, effort, and attention to detail. This includes proper mounting to Bristol Board.
Yes, I was professional with mounting and the correct size board, etc