Does the design include a primary focal point? Where is it located and how is the focal point emphasized? Refer to the rule of thirds and the “How to Create a Focal Point” handout.
focal point is dead center on the page where the dripping black comes down its bolder.
Has a Visual Flow been established that activates the entire picture plane? What elements are used to lead the eye around the entire composition?
the direction of the lines converging is the flow
How have you established a directional dominance?
How have you established a directional conflict? Does your design make use of implied lines?
Does your design include a full value range?
the implied lines of the lines going out into the distance builds conflict with the bold dripping black lines .
What are the successful AND unsuccessful aspects of your design? Remember that we learn just as much from our failures than from our achievements!
The clean sharp images have been a success as well as the converging lines . Unsuccessful would have the be the smudging of black in places
Has the final design been executed in a professional manner? Designs should utilize the designated materials with care, effort, and attention to detail. This includes proper mounting to Bristol Board.
i believe this was my most professional and thought out of the rest so yeah.